Sales template
{{business_name}}'s website is losing you customers
Sell a website redesign to a local business with an outdated site
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{{business_name}}'s website — one issue costing you leadsEmail body
Hi {{first_name}}, I checked {{business_name}}'s site — it loads in {{load_time}} seconds on mobile. Google's threshold is 3s; anything slower drops you in local rankings. We rebuild local {{industry}} sites in 2 weeks, mobile-first, with call tracking built in. Want me to send a free audit of the top 3 issues? {{signature}}
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{{first_name}}Prospect's first name
{{business_name}}The local business name
{{load_time}}Replace with your load time
{{industry}}Prospect's industry vertical
{{signature}}Your email signature
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A specific site audit data point (load time) turns a generic pitch into a credible diagnosis.
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